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Post by Ann on Feb 3, 2006 0:14:29 GMT
I've got one or two possible words in line 13
"While..............thine are................be spread
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Post by Ann on Feb 3, 2006 0:20:13 GMT
I'm on a roll, I think I've just completed lines 2 and 3!
The sailors cried, but through the din
"Goodbye", she cried as from a tomb.
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Post by PAWS on Feb 3, 2006 7:25:41 GMT
Well done Ann. Now I se why the G is missing from 3.
7. Cries aloud Lord have [must be mercy, but don't see why]
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Post by Ann on Feb 3, 2006 12:23:42 GMT
According to the article I found she just cries "Lord have me", which is just as confusing. We can't even see what we're trying to find a rhyme for as we don't have the end of line 8 either.
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Post by Cathrin on Feb 3, 2006 17:47:13 GMT
Line 1. Come Mrs Rogers quickly swim
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Post by Cathrin on Feb 3, 2006 17:49:27 GMT
Whoops doublepost sorry you did that line anyway
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Post by PAWS on Feb 3, 2006 20:36:54 GMT
5. Then she of such a generous heart
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Post by Ann on Feb 3, 2006 23:43:34 GMT
Graham, you keep solving the bits that completely defeat me! That's a hag!
Cathrin, I think you're right about quick or quickly, but if line 2 is correct, then line one has to rhyme with din. All I can see is a boy jumpin or leapin..........................Ah! light dawns as I type!
"Come Mrs Rogers, quick jump in"
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Post by PAWS on Feb 4, 2006 0:32:54 GMT
And vice versa, Ann. Perhaps great minds sometimes think differently!
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Post by PAWS on Feb 5, 2006 18:15:40 GMT
Line 7 might be "Great Lord, have me" for the capital L.
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Post by Ann on Feb 6, 2006 0:44:09 GMT
Line 7 might be " Great Lord, have me" for the capital L. But where does the equation at the end come in?? |
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Post by PAWS on Feb 6, 2006 10:26:07 GMT
eerrr . . . pass.
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Post by Ann on Feb 6, 2006 17:17:43 GMT
Is the end of line 13 "sea be spread"?
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Post by Cathrin on Feb 6, 2006 18:18:56 GMT
Every time I work a bit out, (When I should be working)
I come home to find some one has beaten me to it LOL ;D
Now I'm stuck
What is another word for ode? poem? verse? rhym?
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